tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post1623722188330835324..comments2023-03-25T08:59:06.649-04:00Comments on F.E. Sewell: 1st Campaign ChallengeF.E. Sewellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04222968586032981217noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-9071411194530239972011-09-25T01:10:34.388-04:002011-09-25T01:10:34.388-04:00I like how sweet and light-hearted this is. Very ...I like how sweet and light-hearted this is. Very different from much of what I've read in the challenge, so far. (I'm still making my way through the entries!!)Shannon Lawrencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00934641808195675935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-16829323723597195302011-09-19T14:36:13.972-04:002011-09-19T14:36:13.972-04:00I love the characterization in this piece. Nice jo...I love the characterization in this piece. Nice job.Susan Oloierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07311938400999953443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-39331686081667266132011-09-16T20:21:08.188-04:002011-09-16T20:21:08.188-04:00This is such a sweet story. Love it :)This is such a sweet story. Love it :)Callie Leuckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09535505792102190920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-16912100368183960742011-09-14T00:29:14.438-04:002011-09-14T00:29:14.438-04:00Ok. This just goes to show how demented I am...I g...Ok. This just goes to show how demented I am...I got the creeps from your story...like Pappy was the Pied Piper or something - his fiddle mesmerizes the kids and then he can kidnap them or molest them or something...GOD I'm so completely screwed up!<br /><br />But man, I thought it was SUPER AWESOME!Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00163850266884874892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-75565847006748787462011-09-12T23:08:20.953-04:002011-09-12T23:08:20.953-04:00Fiddles always bring goosbumps to my arms as well....Fiddles always bring goosbumps to my arms as well. :) Wonderful and sweet story!Amanda Milnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07582468814920761586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-38089796051010185312011-09-11T00:07:53.628-04:002011-09-11T00:07:53.628-04:00Wow! Thanks for the feedback, everyone! So glad yo...Wow! Thanks for the feedback, everyone! So glad you all enjoyed it!F.E. Sewellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04222968586032981217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-54092286117625367552011-09-10T18:38:06.910-04:002011-09-10T18:38:06.910-04:00Very funVery funAlica McKenna Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12159703224812368401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-54125372082592642332011-09-10T06:31:21.540-04:002011-09-10T06:31:21.540-04:00You have created a wonderful melody here. It made ...You have created a wonderful melody here. It made me think that the boy is destined to become a great musician.Roy Stationhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15925228088311754322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-49961991644634078832011-09-09T23:34:33.548-04:002011-09-09T23:34:33.548-04:00You had me at "Well I declare" because i...You had me at "Well I declare" because it felt like home. Sweet!Tia Bachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18336780518125138789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-72513725041386068582011-09-09T16:10:41.122-04:002011-09-09T16:10:41.122-04:00Like it? I love it. Well done!Like it? I love it. Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00769602845843608247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-21428027568688668372011-09-09T13:35:50.566-04:002011-09-09T13:35:50.566-04:00I really like this! I think you have done a great ...I really like this! I think you have done a great job at capturing a moment of wonder and awe that even a little sourpuss can't deny. Great job.Brennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03852146274411023781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-49236959409718772522011-09-09T10:56:53.915-04:002011-09-09T10:56:53.915-04:00Hi there,
Fellow campaigner paying you a return v...Hi there,<br /><br />Fellow campaigner paying you a return visit.<br /><br />Love this story, I could clearly visualise the characters.<br /><br />ClaireBucksWriterhttp://www.clairemarriott.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-15749094086610147522011-09-08T22:27:36.238-04:002011-09-08T22:27:36.238-04:00I like this and the idea that he could be won over...I like this and the idea that he could be won over by music. Well done. Mine is #72Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-26916384588858496202011-09-08T22:08:43.231-04:002011-09-08T22:08:43.231-04:00Wow, what a great story. I loved the way the kids ...Wow, what a great story. I loved the way the kids played with Pappy and how the bitter boy ended up with a smile too. Happiness can often be overlooked as an intriguing and exciting emotion - but you utilised it very well here. As a judge for the first challenge, I'm glad to say that you've been shortlisted to move onto round two. Great work :)Nickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12726678438584115062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-34635869566713660802011-09-08T18:04:16.209-04:002011-09-08T18:04:16.209-04:00"Well, I declare." You had me from there..."Well, I declare." You had me from there. Great job!Elana Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05877856005992028912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-74449902247778092002011-09-08T11:37:20.788-04:002011-09-08T11:37:20.788-04:00What a sweet scene! Music has a way of bring peopl...What a sweet scene! Music has a way of bring people together, doesn't it? That was awesome.<br /><br />Good work! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-8221626829603616192011-09-08T10:31:27.881-04:002011-09-08T10:31:27.881-04:00Ah, a cheerful story at last! Wish I could write l...Ah, a cheerful story at last! Wish I could write like you :)<br /><br />Would like to invite you to <a href="http://amloki.blogspot.com/p/sign-up-for-rule-of-three-blogfest.html" rel="nofollow">The Rule of Three Blogfest</a> ---a month-long extravaganza in the fictional town of Renaissance this October, with some great prizes, comment love, and of course, a lot of exposure for your writing.<br /><br />We could do with some fun, games and music at the town of Renaissance. Hope to see you there!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-54607001306658715972011-09-08T10:16:43.219-04:002011-09-08T10:16:43.219-04:00Awww, that was such a sweet piece. I'd love to...Awww, that was such a sweet piece. I'd love to hear the music too!Lori M. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858438789496971734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-81130213209088034002011-09-08T10:06:32.089-04:002011-09-08T10:06:32.089-04:00Like the others I think your story is great! I wro...Like the others I think your story is great! I wrote a children's story,too. I'm #296.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-55493704457872860212011-09-08T09:44:18.452-04:002011-09-08T09:44:18.452-04:00That was lovely! A testament to the power of music...That was lovely! A testament to the power of music. Very, very well-done! :-)Crystalhttp://littlebundleofcontradictions.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-31657325062090313642011-09-08T09:17:18.828-04:002011-09-08T09:17:18.828-04:00I'm not surprised you wrote about music! Nice ...I'm not surprised you wrote about music! Nice scene with the child connecting to the old man through his fiddle. Perfect picture too.Luanne G. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15762881276976395955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-24474714472437939982011-09-08T06:07:52.525-04:002011-09-08T06:07:52.525-04:00"Musical honey", loved it. This had a wo..."Musical honey", loved it. This had a wonderful tone and I really enjoyed the way it flowed.Isis Rushdanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06773053495985834484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-12673963814291290962011-09-08T03:49:52.033-04:002011-09-08T03:49:52.033-04:00What a lovely ending, you paint a great picture of...What a lovely ending, you paint a great picture of music helping a child to belong.Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2503055505405370766.post-1094996128538838332011-09-08T03:11:26.762-04:002011-09-08T03:11:26.762-04:00Such fun, lighthearted images. Children thrilled ...Such fun, lighthearted images. Children thrilled to see Pappy, and magical music bringing all members of the family together. Lovely.Jocelyn Rishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141176507423961390noreply@blogger.com